A collection of daily doodles between artists. RULES: Submit a doodle a day, weekends are optional. If you would like a critique, indicate it under your description. Last but not least, have fun!
Friday, March 1, 2013
Sneak peak
Lots to be done and fixed. I set the deadline to finish her this sunday
Nice! I'm loving the twist of her torso, and her arms look very fluid. I'm thinking that the torso might actually be a bit too long though. I'm not sure... I don't usually have a very good eye for torsos and I tend to make them too long as well.
Her right leg seems nicely grounded, but I'm not entirely sure what the other leg's doing. Kinda floating in the air? Or is it supposed to be on something? I think it might be too stiff and weird.
Pretty easy to fix those things though, with a bit of fancy marquee tool footwork in photoshop. Overall I like it!
Nice! I'm loving the twist of her torso, and her arms look very fluid. I'm thinking that the torso might actually be a bit too long though. I'm not sure... I don't usually have a very good eye for torsos and I tend to make them too long as well.
ReplyDeleteHer right leg seems nicely grounded, but I'm not entirely sure what the other leg's doing. Kinda floating in the air? Or is it supposed to be on something? I think it might be too stiff and weird.
Pretty easy to fix those things though, with a bit of fancy marquee tool footwork in photoshop. Overall I like it!