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Hair's better, but the blade still doesn't look right. You're so close to perfection! ... Okay, maybe perfection is a bit of a scary word to use.
Anyways, usually when I do things with clearly defined edges, I'll start off with flat colours. each flat face of the object should be separated out, with crisp edges between them. Then you can add a bit of variation to the value, and some reflected colours and whatnot, but those faces must always remain distinct.
I can see that you've started to separate the faces, but I think you've gone in too early with a textured brush. You missed that first step of just placing the flat colours down.
Hair's better, but the blade still doesn't look right. You're so close to perfection! ... Okay, maybe perfection is a bit of a scary word to use.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, usually when I do things with clearly defined edges, I'll start off with flat colours. each flat face of the object should be separated out, with crisp edges between them. Then you can add a bit of variation to the value, and some reflected colours and whatnot, but those faces must always remain distinct.
I can see that you've started to separate the faces, but I think you've gone in too early with a textured brush. You missed that first step of just placing the flat colours down.
You're on the final stretch, Erik! runrunrunrun.
Damn you and your great criticism.. I shall go back and fix his blade for good.. I shall RUN
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