tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933809576544992579.post4031830823000223866..comments2023-06-11T01:53:01.553-07:00Comments on That was funny.: 2013.02.13Jane Choihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09931886273601496976noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933809576544992579.post-67426072051936314872013-02-14T00:44:37.581-08:002013-02-14T00:44:37.581-08:00*her breast as in the girl in the foreground**her breast as in the girl in the foreground*Erik Lyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02236741211300272258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933809576544992579.post-56738876736851237202013-02-14T00:44:15.145-08:002013-02-14T00:44:15.145-08:00You could probably trim down a little bit of her b...You could probably trim down a little bit of her body under her breast. I agree with Jane relaxing the arm down will definitely help. Personally I think you could also expand the composition a little bit more to right and even flip the canvas. That way our eye will read into the image better. I think that it's a cool idea, and that red on her robe will definitely pop! If you expand the canvas a little, you will also have some nice real estate to maybe put down a lamp or some candles like Anna said. I think you should keep at it!Erik Lyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02236741211300272258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933809576544992579.post-37763825778614168752013-02-14T00:10:10.813-08:002013-02-14T00:10:10.813-08:00probably relax the arm with the knife a little. yo...probably relax the arm with the knife a little. you try holding something behind your back to that height.Jane Choihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09931886273601496976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8933809576544992579.post-68199511702480485422013-02-13T22:07:47.574-08:002013-02-13T22:07:47.574-08:00I prefer the original version you had with the tab...I prefer the original version you had with the table and the candle in the foreground. You could totally merge the two ideas by putting like...an ominous hand on the table with the knife.Anna K.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08105533105221019289noreply@blogger.com